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What Went Wrong

When submerged in sorrow's sea, Why reject a helping hand? A broken sparrow, fragile be, Alone, you cannot stand. Somewhere along the winding way, In the darkest night, the dimmest day, A realization softly spoke, In solitude, the heart awoke. To weep alone, a sign of might, Yet sharing tears feels not quite right. To show that weakness, to confess, Is to reveal I'm powerless.

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