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What We Want To Create

If I could calm the ocean, Uncurl the waves for now Bring peace with understanding That not all crashes to shore Not all things are salt in wounds A soft empty beach at night Can greet shiny ripples in moonlight Glimmers of hope can hang on Like barnacles to the jagged rocks Not letting go in rough weather Hope rests in the quiet night Where loneliness can also visit Instead take your hand in mine Tides do not deliver what we expect It is about what we want to create Like the painter on the shoreline Brush in hand, painting a memory As the sun rises upon our faces In a new day that has only just begun Heidi Sands 5/28/17

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Date: 5/28/2017 5:50:00 PM
Miss Heidi, you have captured our breaths with such beauty here. Perfectly beautiful :) xoxo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Akkina :)
Date: 5/28/2017 2:05:00 PM
- Heidi, you paint is beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/28/2017 8:01:00 AM
Wow Heidi..I love this...so many great lines...if I could uncurl the waves...what an image...one of your best ...a fave
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2017 8:22:00 AM
Hi Tim. Thank you so much for your encouraging and supportive comment :)
Date: 5/28/2017 7:35:00 AM
Splendid shift in the middle flowing into the nice ending ... Liked it ...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Probir. I appreciate your feedback :)

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