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When the Lady died, you cried and cried,
but she was not really a saint, though
you treated her so, and when the true saint
died in time nearby, there was little weeping
and no pomp and silly circumstance for her.
But then she was quite old and wont 
to love the poor....

And when the Prince expired alone and 
untethered, you wailed and mourned--
but why was your grief?
You did not know him, he did not know himself.

Why do you seek false gods
to follow and vainly worship,
and not seek out the One 
who made you before time?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Truths to ponder in your First place winning poem L.J. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest! : )
Carber Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Connie, it is much appreciated!
Wood Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations on this win L. J. All I can say to this is Amen!
Carber Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, Dean-- much appreciated!
Gauthier Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Strong and powerful messages. Thank you for sharing.
Carber Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you, I appreciate it!
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank you, Ovidiu!
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April 30, 2016 at 9:26 AM
Wonderful poem-meditation. Conscience may hard grow like grass at its time. Vainly you pull and ask it to grow. It has its time. We miss Patience, a giant statue of patience and that incredible wind of hope...The weather as well as the characters seem to be very changeable.
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