What We Gave

You know you use The Word destructively with only you in consideration.
What we gave was a worldview through parables of creation.
You only construct the positive for you to be paid.
What we gave was insight out of a cave.
Life was so dark that prayer is our only savior.
Souls were freed from abomination of your evil ways.
We gave what heals iniquity.
What we gave was a world that defeats wickedness.

When the world became obscure from your wrongful deeds, we gave the 
     people a greater belief.
The inquisition was via a better way.
Monotheistic Christianity became our faith.
We gave what God commanded us to give.
By covenant, we wrote our Rite.
We gave an infrastructure of empowerment for greater enlightenment.
This is our pilgrimage.
What we gave is a sacred place enshrined.
We honor God with body, soul, and mind.
Satan, you are denied.
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PENNED ON JUNE 17, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/15/2014 11:52:00 AM
good triumphs the evil. congrats on fine win Verlena. Mohan
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/15/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Mohan... Verlena
Date: 7/14/2014 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Verlena.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/14/2014 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Faye... Hugs Verlena
Date: 7/14/2014 8:43:00 AM
Very strong and written with a sense of determination and conviction. Congrats on a well deserved win, Verlena. // paul
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/14/2014 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Paul for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 7/14/2014 1:08:00 AM
Very extensive write Verlena! Outstanding! Congrats on huge win!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/14/2014 2:42:00 AM
Thanks Upma. Verlena
Date: 7/13/2014 9:15:00 PM
Verlena, this is an interesting write, I shall have to think on it some. Congrats on the win
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/13/2014 9:18:00 PM
Thanks John... If you have questions, feel free to ask... Hugs Verlena
Date: 7/13/2014 7:07:00 PM
Verlena, very powerfully told message about enlightenment, very lovely poem. Congratulations on your win. I appreciated all the wonderful entries to this contests, thanks much for entering.
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Date: 7/13/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thanks for your supportive of my poem via contest Sheri... Hugs Verlena
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