What War -- Why Worry

Bombs dropping
Wives shopping

Guns blazing
Frats hazing

Troops shooting
Crooks looting

Tanks rumbling
Drunks stumbling

Ships sinking
Flirts winking

More killing
Steaks grilling

Blood flowing
Moms sewing

Wounds gaping
Teens vaping

Men missing
Lips kissing

Hordes dying
Pols lying...



        September 10, 2020
    Threes, Please Poetry Contest
        Sponsor: Beth Evans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gershon. Day to day life goes on, even in chaos. A super poem. Best wishes.
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much, Evelyn. :) gw
Watt Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Your contrasting couplets are so sobering, GW. But this is the first time I've heard that politicians actually lie... say it isn't so! Great write, and congrats on your win ~ JW
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:26 PM
Thanks for the comment, John. And by the way, it's not true that politicians don't lie... lol. :) gw
Fowler Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 7:05 PM
Nice gw. Why worry indeed? Congratulations on your placement! Linda
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:25 PM
Thank you for noticing, Linda! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 12:51 PM
This is maybe the most profound poem I have ever read in my entire life. WOW!
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Why, thank you, Caren! Such an unexpected endorsement! :) gw
Brewer Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 2:20 AM
Life goes on and on. You convey the inevitability with an underlying feeling of sardonic acceptance. Nice one Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Bombs away; we shrug. As long as it doesn't touch us... Such is the malleable mind of man --- except for the saints maybe... Thanks, Geoffrey
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Love how you've composed this Gershon, very creative. Tom
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Thanks for the praise on this one. Trying my best on this end. Wishing you a great weekend, Gershon
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace