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A droplet of water. Millions of molecules, zillions of interactions; Chaos. Struggle continues, for self preservation; And annihilation. It is unique. HA HA HA One of so many. Born and struggles to live, creates attachment; A puddle, a pond, a river, a sea, an ocean. Only to evaporate; to die. A struggle meaningful, only till it ends. Worthless in summation. Or, is it? Don’t know the answer. Only know this; its life.

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Date: 9/22/2024 10:41:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:03:00 PM
Dr Sarthak Sahoo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:04:00 PM
Dr Sarthak Sahoo, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/10/2009 10:33:00 PM
dear hamlet... u too haven't lost ur touch! amazing.. i love this write- ks2.
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Date: 5/6/2009 9:38:00 AM
this is a really cool poem, deep and thought provoking. welcome to the soup
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Date: 5/5/2009 4:26:00 AM
Doc, Hi!!! this cool poem has a deep interlife, in referrence to the scheme of life in the solar-system...that's the way I see it... great poem!! and thanks for your welcome comments! your friend..Jim
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