Gershon Wolf Poet Limerick

What Tommy Uncorked

He sure was naive, that Tommy O'Rourke
He didn't know gin was what he'd uncorked
   He took a long swig
   His girl danced a jig
Just nine months 'till the visit from the stork

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Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2020 at 12:05 PM So cute and so true. You made me smile. Have a wonderful day writing..... Gershon Wolf January 28, 2020 at 1:34 PM Hey, thank you so much, Paula. Glad you smiled. Keep smiling now! Cheers, Gershon

Lindsay Laurie January 27, 2020 at 5:35 PM G'day Gershon … another case of how wine can get you into trouble. The cork should have served another purpose - thanks Gershon - Lindsay Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 6:13 PM Ha, ha! You are right about that cork, Lindsay. But once they pop that cork... Oh, well! Thanks, Gershon

Ronald D Thompson January 27, 2020 at 3:26 PM A great fun write Gershon. Enjoyed immensely. Ron :) Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 5:56 PM Thanks for the encouragement, Ron! Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Jean Bush January 27, 2020 at 2:19 PM OMG! You are so talented. Very funny but not 9 months from now. HA! Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 5:56 PM Ha, ha --- Perhaps even funnier 9 months from now... Who knows?! Thanks for the nice compliment, Jean! Best wishes, Gershon

Kitty Lou January 27, 2020 at 1:56 PM Poor Tommy O'Rourke! Good One!!! Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 2:18 PM Not to worry. Tommy's wealthy. He'll get a nanny for whatever the stork drops off. LOL. Thanks, Kitty! :) Gershon

Sandra Adams January 27, 2020 at 10:48 AM lol...oops... you do have a way with limericks my friend... thanks for the laugh! hugs Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 2:16 PM Alw Always glad to hear that you laughed. Thanks for the feedback, Sandra! Cheers, Gershon

Line Gauthier January 27, 2020 at 8:18 AM Jolly good, Gershon. LOL Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 2:15 PM No storks over Canada anymore, I hear. LOL. Thanks, Line. :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues January 26, 2020 at 11:19 PM That’s when things get real! Gershon Wolf January 27, 2020 at 2:14 PM Yup. 9 months and counting; then reality hits --- hard. You are so right, Kim! Thanks, Gershon