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What Tommy Uncorked

He sure was naive, that Tommy O'Rourke He didn't know gin was what he'd uncorked He took a long swig His girl danced a jig Just nine months 'till the visit from the stork

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/28/2020 12:05:00 PM
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So cute and so true. You made me smile. Have a wonderful day writing.....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/28/2020 1:34:00 PM
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Hey, thank you so much, Paula. Glad you smiled. Keep smiling now! Cheers, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/27/2020 5:35:00 PM
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G'day Gershon … another case of how wine can get you into trouble. The cork should have served another purpose - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 6:13:00 PM
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Ha, ha! You are right about that cork, Lindsay. But once they pop that cork... Oh, well! Thanks, Gershon
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 1/27/2020 3:26:00 PM
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A great fun write Gershon. Enjoyed immensely. Ron :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 5:56:00 PM
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Thanks for the encouragement, Ron! Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
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Jean Bush
Date: 1/27/2020 2:19:00 PM
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OMG! You are so talented. Very funny but not 9 months from now. HA!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 5:56:00 PM
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Ha, ha --- Perhaps even funnier 9 months from now... Who knows?! Thanks for the nice compliment, Jean! Best wishes, Gershon
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Kitty Lou
Date: 1/27/2020 1:56:00 PM
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Poor Tommy O'Rourke! Good One!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:18:00 PM
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Not to worry. Tommy's wealthy. He'll get a nanny for whatever the stork drops off. LOL. Thanks, Kitty! :) Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/27/2020 10:48:00 AM
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lol...oops... you do have a way with limericks my friend... thanks for the laugh! hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:16:00 PM
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Alw Always glad to hear that you laughed. Thanks for the feedback, Sandra! Cheers, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2020 8:18:00 AM
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Jolly good, Gershon. LOL
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:15:00 PM
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No storks over Canada anymore, I hear. LOL. Thanks, Line. :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2020 11:19:00 PM
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That’s when things get real!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:14:00 PM
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Yup. 9 months and counting; then reality hits --- hard. You are so right, Kim! Thanks, Gershon

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