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What Tommy Uncorked

He sure was naive, that Tommy O'Rourke He didn't know gin was what he'd uncorked He took a long swig His girl danced a jig Just nine months 'till the visit from the stork

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2020 12:05:00 PM

So cute and so true. You made me smile. Have a wonderful day writing.....

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/28/2020 1:34:00 PM

Hey, thank you so much, Paula. Glad you smiled. Keep smiling now! Cheers, Gershon

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/27/2020 5:35:00 PM

G'day Gershon … another case of how wine can get you into trouble. The cork should have served another purpose - thanks Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 6:13:00 PM

Ha, ha! You are right about that cork, Lindsay. But once they pop that cork... Oh, well! Thanks, Gershon

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/27/2020 3:26:00 PM

A great fun write Gershon. Enjoyed immensely. Ron :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 5:56:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement, Ron! Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

Jean Bush

Date: 1/27/2020 2:19:00 PM

OMG! You are so talented. Very funny but not 9 months from now. HA!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 5:56:00 PM

Ha, ha --- Perhaps even funnier 9 months from now... Who knows?! Thanks for the nice compliment, Jean! Best wishes, Gershon

Kitty Lou

Date: 1/27/2020 1:56:00 PM

Poor Tommy O'Rourke! Good One!!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:18:00 PM

Not to worry. Tommy's wealthy. He'll get a nanny for whatever the stork drops off. LOL. Thanks, Kitty! :) Gershon

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/27/2020 10:48:00 AM

lol...oops... you do have a way with limericks my friend... thanks for the laugh! hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:16:00 PM

Alw Always glad to hear that you laughed. Thanks for the feedback, Sandra! Cheers, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/27/2020 8:18:00 AM

Jolly good, Gershon. LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:15:00 PM

No storks over Canada anymore, I hear. LOL. Thanks, Line. :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/26/2020 11:19:00 PM

That’s when things get real!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:14:00 PM

Yup. 9 months and counting; then reality hits --- hard. You are so right, Kim! Thanks, Gershon