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What To Use As Bait

What to use as bait What wouild catch him? Compel him? Inspire him? Intrigue him? Should she be herself Or someone more daring, More exotic, more lively? She had some choices to make She chose unwisely Landed him They married And her real self came out Lesson learned Use your true self as bait You may not want to catch a fish Who has nothing in common with you

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Date: 11/9/2019 11:16:00 PM
She should just be 'herself'. The whole realistic ...Apple, Warts, worms and all ...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/10/2019 3:08:00 AM
Absolutely right!
Date: 11/9/2019 7:49:00 AM
Just give me the apple without the worm in it.....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/10/2019 3:09:00 AM
Smiling big here.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 11:17:00 PM
boring....the 'worms' have the 'story'....
Date: 11/9/2019 6:18:00 AM
Unfortunately many people are tasteless bait and attract those that are just as much or more! / M
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/10/2019 3:09:00 AM
Yes it is true.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 11:18:00 PM
myopic.

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