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What Time Could Not Keep

the ribbon loosens
from the box’s bent lid,
its faded fibers
fraying at the fold.

paper edges lift~
soft seams separating,
corners curling
into their own collapse.

inside, a small silver pin
dims in the dust,
carrying what time
could not keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 7:39 PM
Very nice alliteration and wording!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:12 PM
Sara, this is a masterful example of imagism. Your use of three concise stanzas perfectly paces the slow, delicate reveal of the forgotten keepsake. I was particularly struck by your brilliant use of alliteration—"faded fibers fraying," "soft seams separating," and "corners curling"—which gives the poem a soft, whispering rhythm that mimics the physical decay of the box. The final image of the dimming silver pin carrying "what time could not keep" is profoundly moving. A beautiful and deeply tactile exploration of memory!
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