What the Lord Gave

The sun rests in its golden orb, shining bright dazzling the eyes
Meadows green with dew drops fresh, the cattle lazing away cries
The farmhands nap beneath the trees, the breeze caress and dies
	
As the curfew knells folks head home and pray
Thanking the Lord for the rewarding day
Face brimming with sheer bliss and mirth
Content they praise and sing from birth
What true happiness can be witnessed herein
For the Lord blesseth those who seek of him.

Those greedy and selfish , pine more riches 
Idle days wasted, in slumber and glitches
While holding contempt for those plebeians
And are never content,  contrasting agrarians
No time for Lord, who observe cadence
No more thanks for the blessings immense 

Heaven doth beckon those who believe
And the rest he reckon, to try and grieve

For....
This is the day that God gave to play and he purvey
This is the day that God gave to toil and stop foil
This is the world that God gave, for men to live and pray
This is the world that God gave to care, share and stay.

What a wonderful world!!!


© Nadiya (28 Jan '15)

*Won 3rd place on 30 Jan 2015 in the contest 'This is the day that Lord gave' by Verlena S. Walker
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Haight Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Nadiya, congratulations on your win for your very uplifting, spiritual poem. Hugs, Sandra
Relish Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Thank you Sandra... lov,nad!
Mcdaid Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 4:59 PM
following in his steps golden beautiful pen nadiya adoring piece
Relish Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:45 PM
Thank you Liam... pleased that you liked my pen... nads!
A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 3:54 PM
NADIYA, Awesome WIN.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
Relish Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Thank you friend for your continued support...love,nads!
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Beautiful uplifting write many congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx
Relish Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Jan... for your lovely words.hugs,nads!
Chutani Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 12:39 AM
contentment and prayers are the lessons of the day. congrats for these words and win. Mohan
Relish Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 3:06 AM
Thank you mohan... appreciate your visit and comment... nad!
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January 31, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go with this great write..Thanks for the visit by to say congrats..Sara
Relish Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Thank you Sara... for the visit and comment... nad!
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Lovely spiritual expressions, congrats on the win, Nadiya
Relish Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Thank you very much Dr.Ram..
A   Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 3:45 AM
Your poem is beautiful Nadiya.... Wishing you the best in the contest...PD
Relish Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:01 AM
Thank you very much friend... pleased that you took time to visit and comment...lov,nad!
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January 31, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Nadiya, congratulations on this superlative win! 3rd Place! Verlena
Relish Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 5:58 AM
Thank you very much Verlena... I loved your topic... psoup gives me opportunities to try different kinds of writing... since I am new to poetry writing it helps me think beyond... hugs, nads!
Callus Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Beautiful and inspiring, Nadiya! The message loud and clear! The imagery in the first stanza is restful and peaceful. Let us all together enjoy this gift which God has given us. #7 // paul
Relish Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Paul for your ever supportive words... appreciate your visit... regards, nad!
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January 29, 2015 at 12:11 PM
What a wonderful World indeed Nad. Let us follow God's steps> Divine poem> my favlisted. Good luck Nad. For me a topper>Your friend
Relish Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Rajat... your comments always make me smile... nad
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January 29, 2015 at 8:48 AM
You have expressed the theme with eloquence and heart. I enjoyed your poem of praise.
Relish Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Richard for the kind words... appreciate your visit.
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January 28, 2015 at 3:34 PM
What a beautiful world,what a wonderful poem...Touching your song of praise.Let us all hold hands..All people with different religions but all so alike,Let us pray as children of God!Adding it to my fvs.Charma B-)
Relish Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:50 AM
Charma, thank you for the comment so inspiring... pleased that you took time to read my poem and understood the essence... agree with your words totaly... lov n hugs, nad!
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January 28, 2015 at 2:10 PM
joyous, joyous chant of a life graced by heaven's love.. truly inspiring, nads.. great work!.. huggs
Relish Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Thank you Nette... for the visit and your lovely words
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January 28, 2015 at 1:04 PM
This is so lovely, Nadiya. Simply beautiful. I feel your faith in the lines...We are often not thankful enough for our blessings. Lovely...Good luck in the contest.
Relish Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Thank you Eileen... appreciate your comment on my poem:)... lov.
Pinet Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Bravo...A great piece with strong emotions offering pure gentle love and a blanket of comfort wrapped in the arms of the Lord. Your poem has captured the spirit of “trust in the Lord" with words that awaken the faith that dwells in the hearts of most people, which through neglect has been allowed to remain dormant far too long. Emile.
Relish Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Emile... your comments are always up to the point and help me to see my own writes in a different light as well.. apoeciate your visit... nad.
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January 28, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Beautiful, Nadiya! Every line is uplifting and a joy to read...best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
Relish Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Thank you Rhonda... really appreciate your visit and the uplifting comment:).. lov n hugs, nad!
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January 28, 2015 at 11:43 AM
- A winning poem in my eyes, dear Nadiya :) ..... a beautiful poem !!! (7+) - I wish you best of luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Relish Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 12:13 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise... your comments never fail to encourage me... appreciate your visit... lov, nad!
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