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What the Heck

we're trapped, and, inherently speaking those of us here don't want us to escape : ) what a : ) ........ life is time time is life it is mine like a wife there is no contradiction (that is not how) it seems we live in an abstract (multi-dimensional) the means ah, the mazes the phases the faces of time when will it end these crazes of mine when will it end these hazes of line .... i see, said the ban-she, you are of the hinge ...me!?...am of the cringe, the lock and the key...so please allow me to flee...not flea... oh gawd...it's all up to me... it's enough to make one screee ...mmm...i've got a thought...a short time out, try some p_t : ) ......hmmm....a bit better.... now for meaning and force of letter, .......... ...need some supper.

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Sand Blown

Date: 11/19/2020 5:58:00 AM

....thanks....mathematics of time-space is a hobby of great adventure.....sweet on the imagination.....andt....as more fun than....um...ahhh.....extreme sudoku?.... write on my man........stan sand

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/19/2020 1:10:00 AM

beautifully described the relation between life and time; I enjoyed

Uwe Stroh

Date: 7/28/2018 9:38:00 PM

I see where you are coming from there. Keep it up.

Sand Blown
Date: 7/28/2018 10:54:00 PM

...ya, i've got one foot in the hole : )

Lyric Man

Date: 7/27/2018 12:19:00 PM

Deep smile forming as I read... the lingering Muse will cause the smile to last for some time!!

Sand Blown
Date: 7/28/2018 10:59:00 PM

....keep on smiling and the whole world smiles with you.... (louis armstrong)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/26/2018 10:03:00 PM

Lol! Was not expecting that. Awesome ;) xomo

Sand Blown
Date: 7/28/2018 10:57:00 PM

...glad to help out

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/26/2018 9:52:00 PM

Such elegant Smile poetry, Sand B. So deep are these thought waves of yours in the cerebral sea! Word celibacy or ink pleasure inevitability ... Si? Oui? Ah, just let the wash of the gentle third-eye breeze give comfort to this pleasant read. You truly are a gifted wordsmith indeed. Magnificent poetry ... aurora bright write. Love and more love always.

Sand Blown
Date: 7/27/2018 6:15:00 AM

thanks man...cool