What Souls Cry In the Rain

when the rain is falling
and the wind is dead
the souls are crying.
As the rain falls.
What souls cry in the rain
as the sun rises 
beyond the clouds,
and the moon drops 
beyond the earth
the souls of earth cry
as the rain comes before the fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Beautiful! congratulations on your win!----lori
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Congrats Jesse on a great big win with this elegant poetry luv.. truly awesome...
Quigley Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Jesse
Brown Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Pick" contest Jesse. Love, Carol
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