Janice Canerdy Poet Verse

What She Said When She Was Done

When did you first conclude that I
was placed upon this Earth to cry
and wait for you to love me too?
You’ve arrogantly missed each clue
that I am truly over you!

 

Date: August 26, 2019

Contest Title: Writing Challenge 3, August 2019--5 lines

Sponsor: Dear Heart--Wiishkobi Ode

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Richard Lamoureux September 8, 2019 at 7:30 AM You sound like a wise woman. ;0) Janice Canerdy September 8, 2019 at 7:33 AM Thanks, Richard. I don't know about THAT! LOL! Janice

CayCay Godwin September 7, 2019 at 11:16 PM I love this "get it done, slap it on him, in his face, oh let him have it verbally" write! No flinching! It is so dramatically accurate, I actually relate to it. Felt this, I did. All the best ... CayCay Janice Canerdy September 8, 2019 at 6:52 AM CayCay, I LOVE knowing someone can relate to one of my poems. THANK YOU! Janice

Constance La France August 31, 2019 at 10:21 PM Janice, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge ~ Janice Canerdy August 31, 2019 at 11:04 PM THANK YOU for my placement! :-)

P.S. Awtry August 27, 2019 at 10:19 AM You go girl! Powerful and empowering write! Best of luck! Janice Canerdy August 27, 2019 at 1:24 PM Thanks so much, P.S. Janice

Lindsay Laurie August 26, 2019 at 10:44 PM Hello Janice … and rightly so it seems. A verse for so many Janice - thank you - Lindsay Janice Canerdy August 26, 2019 at 11:25 PM Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice