What She Said

first the sun rose,
bustin up the cuddle coma.
she rose.  I rose.
heads a-stuffed with snuggle soma.
on a quiet tuesday morning treetops rose,
golden into the sun.
and she told a story
about a rose.
that rose you felt
she said: yesterday,
when you felt that rose,
fingers parting petals gently
probing through luscious
layers of enviable softness
down to the secret center
of the flower.
yea, even unto that stiff
little stamen.
and out again,
dusty with pollen,
messy with the scent of a rose.
I was that flower.
That’s what she said.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/11/2015 2:42:00 PM
Hi Christopher, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/10/2015 5:34:00 PM
Christopher, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/10/2015 11:41:00 PM
Thanks so much for the kind welcome, SKAT. I'm delighted to make your acquaintance. Now that we're friends, I'm looking forward to reading your work! Hugs* Christopher
Date: 12/10/2015 5:13:00 PM
Christopher, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/10/2015 11:58:00 PM
Linda, thanks! I'm already enjoying this community immensely. Your warm welcome is a ray of sunshine. I look forward to reading your poems and I'm happy to be your new friend. Always feel free to get in touch for any reason. :) Christopher
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