What Shaped My Life

Time and events chisel and shape our lives,
an unknown sculptor blue prints your life plan,
a knock here, a cut there, we think ‘not fair’
we journey along through ridges and lairs,
rewards flow in that we relish and cheer,
count our gains in terms of money we earn,
real reward is that we don’t understand,
the gift of wisdom that comes with failures,
the gift of forbearance that comes with grief,
the gift of love that comes with family,
the gift of happiness comes from sharing,
the gift of compassion helps us wipe tears!
from end of life we look back to admire,
the road map of our journey now much clear,
brothers, sisters with parents and teachers,
have guided my life to what it matters,
enemies who threw at me their arrows,
helped me strengthen to counter my sorrows,
every defeat made me that much smarter,
thanks to many foes for playing their part,
If my life had been happy and easy,
I would have ended up a useless slob!


2nd placement
‘It is a part of me’ Poetry contest!
Silent One
Written 15/11/2020

10 syllables each line 
rhyme not intended!
22 lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:23 AM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Anne Lise! Kind regards Krish
Mitra Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Such precious gifts are those you mention above...Congrats Krish on your win.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Carol! much appreciate your supportive words! :)
One Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Thanks S.O! Delighted to be appreciated with a placement! Thank you for another interesting contest!!
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:05 AM
A favourite for me. Too good... So many great lines.... I agree with all you wrote. Will read it many more times...
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Rama! I am honoured you have fav it!! I am always delighted to hear from you!
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