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What Once Was

Fragments of a house foundation blacken by the fire. Never rebuilt empty lot nice size Good shade tress and high grass Potential promising Did a child perish here? People once resided Old swing set rusting Not long before it falls the wind sways the swing seat clanky cracky sound from old long chains Half a peach tree left from lightning strike years ago. Blossoms bud on tender twigs of new growth. sounds of yesterday emit a mother singing children playing dogs barking dad mowing lawn... Today silence settles Tomorrow what once was again.

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Date: 7/20/2025 6:38:00 AM
I like the way you told the story in poetic form. Some bad things happen in life, but sometimes the future holds promise. Sara K
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Fritz Purdum
Date: 7/20/2025 7:50:00 AM
Thank you

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