Bryn Strudwick Poet Light Verse

What of Me

WHAT OF ME?

Just between you and me ~
Where did she go?  ~  The girl next door. ~
Temptation? ~  Greener grass?  ~  
It’s all over  ~  Shattered dreams ~ 
Meltdown  ~  
And what of me? ~
A fresh start?  ~  Never again. -CT

7th July 2019
Collaboration of you titles contest
Sponsor - Charles Messina

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Bryn Strudwick July 15, 2019 at 12:44 PM Thanks for the kind comments everyone!

Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2019 at 8:22 AM Very good use of your titles, congrats!

Alexis Y. July 15, 2019 at 3:21 AM Hi Byrn, After reading this " ups and downs of relationships" popped in my head.Congrats on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Wendy Watson July 15, 2019 at 1:08 AM The breaks between the different poem snippets made the reader pause, and suggested someone's fragmented thought pattern about the events. A very effective compilation,Bryn.

Jeanne Mcgee July 14, 2019 at 11:36 PM This worked so well as a new poem! Congrats on your win Bryn.

Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2019 at 10:36 PM Fun! Congratulations!

Charles Messina July 14, 2019 at 8:52 PM Right to the point, short and sweet. Congratulations Bryn on your 1st place win! Charlie

Quoth Theraven July 7, 2019 at 11:15 AM Bryn, Where did she go indeed, the infamous girl next door. I like this poem. Gets right to the subject matter, which doesn't..really matter. But is rewarded still. -Richard