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"what My Hands Hold"

My hands are happy a beautiful smile held closer to just kiss.

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/9/2011 5:26:00 PM

I was touched by this senryu, it was beautiful. you are a master with your pen. thank you for this piece, it has brightened my day with it's warmth. --Madison

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2010 8:16:00 PM

Cupping someone's smiling face with your hands. paints a very loving picture, Michael. Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2010 4:03:00 PM

Your warm heart is glowing through your words Michael >> James

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/21/2010 7:25:00 AM

Just reading this is a joy!! :) Lovely, Michael!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 11/21/2010 7:05:00 AM

Love the sense of presence and happiness. Happy Thanksgiving to you, my brother.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2010 8:45:00 PM

Such a lovely and romantic scene u have written here Michael.. so enjoyed this ..close enough to kiss ... awesome .. so appreciate the sentiments we share in our missing our lost loved ones at this holiday time.. we set places for them anyway.. knowing they are there with us in spirit on celebrating the holidays..luv.. J.G. always and forever W.K...

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/20/2010 1:22:00 PM

Fantastic image of a face w/a beautiful smile held in warm, happy hands! Perfect delightful Senryu, Michael. Have a great weekend! Always, Audrey

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/20/2010 11:46:00 AM

Loved the scene Michael, left me with a silly grin.. Love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2010 10:23:00 AM

oooo! AL AL! I sense all smiles in the air. Enjoyed your wonderful write Michael. What an enjoyment when life is raising up the stakes with happiness. Now keep them smiles up and watch out when you walk. Have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/20/2010 10:13:00 AM

AHHHHH, Michael this is lovely.... As Always, Shar

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2010 10:11:00 AM

whoops.. "senryus"

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2010 10:10:00 AM

i love senrtus, michael and this one is just heavenly done!! thanks for coming by my page with your generous words.. happy poetrying! warmest, nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/20/2010 9:05:00 AM

lovely senryu Michael, much enjoyed this morning

Deb Wilson

Date: 11/20/2010 9:04:00 AM

Ah..very sweet Michael..love it..take care~Deb