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"what My Hands Hold"

My hands are happy

a beautiful smile held

closer to just kiss.

happinesssenryu

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Rhia Madison Thomer

January 9, 2011 at 5:26 PM

I was touched by this senryu, it was beautiful. you are a master with your pen. thank you for this piece, it has brightened my day with it's warmth. --Madison

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2010 at 8:16 PM

Cupping someone's smiling face with your hands. paints a very loving picture, Michael. Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

November 21, 2010 at 4:03 PM

Your warm heart is glowing through your words Michael >> James

Carrie Richards

November 21, 2010 at 7:25 AM

Just reading this is a joy!! :) Lovely, Michael!

L'Nass Shango

November 21, 2010 at 7:05 AM

Love the sense of presence and happiness. Happy Thanksgiving to you, my brother.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 20, 2010 at 8:45 PM

Such a lovely and romantic scene u have written here Michael.. so enjoyed this ..close enough to kiss ... awesome .. so appreciate the sentiments we share in our missing our lost loved ones at this holiday time.. we set places for them anyway.. knowing they are there with us in spirit on celebrating the holidays..luv.. J.G. always and forever W.K...

Audrey Haick

November 20, 2010 at 1:22 PM

Fantastic image of a face w/a beautiful smile held in warm, happy hands! Perfect delightful Senryu, Michael. Have a great weekend! Always, Audrey

Wilma Neels

November 20, 2010 at 11:46 AM

Loved the scene Michael, left me with a silly grin.. Love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

November 20, 2010 at 10:23 AM

oooo! AL AL! I sense all smiles in the air. Enjoyed your wonderful write Michael. What an enjoyment when life is raising up the stakes with happiness. Now keep them smiles up and watch out when you walk. Have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.