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What MITE be

I WANT YOU You WANT ME But, you DONT WANT to be TOGETHER A FORBIDEAN LOVE that could NEVER be shared (sound nice in a way) But, I stay AWAKE WOUNDERING, DREAMING, of what could have COME TO BE. Only if we were ONE. You said "ONE LOVE" But WHO is the "ONE"? & WHO"S "LOVE"? YOUR"S or MINE? BOTH? It's COMIING CLOSE Coming close to NOTHING The clock it TICKING +Angel4eva+ (( leaves comment IF you like... i'v worked hard on some and i'd LIKE to HEAR what YOU HAVE TO SAY)) :) thank you

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Date: 4/6/2011 2:13:00 PM
love is never easy! use the CAP'S sparsely because they are equated to yelling...your form is Free Verse and the title should read What Might be. Light & Love
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Date: 3/30/2011 3:21:00 PM
Suspenseful poem, Brittany!
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