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What Melts Snow

Pick and place cut flowers in the snow Beauty blooms in this thin frozen crust Crisp color petals, soft to the touch Scarlet roses there to lay and glow Truths that thrill make hearts blush In early days, don't trust too much Wintry times won't forever stay We are all pure as the driven slush Some say snow gently coats our land Every flake filled with crystal kindness Falling from a cooling cobalt sky This divine dust sprinkled by his hand Yet in each is a radiant ray Facing this season with human hope Flowers in snow won't wilt from fear Which will warm winter woes far away

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Date: 1/16/2021 12:19:00 PM
Wonderful lines throughout your poem, Emile. I especially like, "We are all pure as the driven slush." Clever + thought provoking. Best wishes, Brian
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/16/2021 6:16:00 PM
Thanks ever so Brian for your comments. As well, congratulations on your fine placement in this contest. Well done.
Date: 1/16/2021 12:16:00 PM
What an excellent write, congrats Greg on your win!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/16/2021 6:18:00 PM
As always, John, I am most appreciative that you included my work. Excellent hosting, thank you.
Date: 1/11/2021 11:56:00 AM
Hello Greg Gaul, Hi! A beautiful poem you have created. I like the two last verses. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/11/2021 4:02:00 PM
Hello Greg, you are welcome i have enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/11/2021 3:45:00 PM
Darlene, your visits are so appreciated. Thanks so much for your kind comments.

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