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What Matters Most

I'm not in competition with anyone I have no wish to play the game I am just trying to be better Than the person I was yesterday If I can accomplish that goal My life has been a great success Fame and fortune are fleeting What's important when your time is up Is the kind of person your were Not the amount in your bank account But how many lives you affected In a positive manner How many people you made smile With those silly bits of nonsense Those moments are worth All the wealth one can garner In a whole entire lifetime When that final day arrives You'll be remembered for your humility Your kindness and your positive nature In a world that needs it oh so badly No one is beyond reproach But I sincerely hope I'll be remembered As a caring loving person Who enjoyed life to the fullest

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Date: 5/29/2022 10:45:00 PM
Brilliant. Yes it would be nice to be remembered for being a good person. Well written.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/30/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thank you dear Jeanette! Certainly a sweet comment! XOX
Date: 5/7/2022 12:33:00 PM
Wealth does NOT mean happiness, by any means. I understand that Naomi Judd was worth 25 MILLION dollars at the time of her death by suicide. Such a shame! This is so well-written, Jack. Thanks!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/7/2022 1:59:00 PM
Or that most of the time money can't buy the things we need the most.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2022 1:17:00 PM
Such a shame wealth doesn't necessarily make one happy! SAD!
Date: 5/7/2022 9:14:00 AM
A fine verse of wisdom Jack, its what's inside a man that counts not how much wealth he has. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2022 1:20:00 PM
Wealth doesn't translate to happiness! Have a good weekend!
Date: 5/7/2022 7:16:00 AM
Excellent poem. A fave for me! :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2022 7:32:00 AM
Aw thank you Heidi my dear friend! Sweet words... XOX

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