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What Mattered Most

Company stores taking most of the paycheck
Days were long and hard at the breaker
It beat being down there, rats were moving
No injuries today, good news
Body hurts, but the kids will be home from school
Stop and have a few before supper
They're growing so fast, soon the hugs will be gone
Shower in the cellar, she doesn't ask for much
Don't want all that tracked through the house
Daddy's home, their bright eyes shine
Got to take care of what matters most
It doesn't get any better, mom, give me a hug
Supper was great, need help with the dishes?
Got some change in my pocket
Might be enough for some ice dream cones
Let's go kids, we'll take a walk
Stop by Grandma's house on the way
Piggyback ride for the little guy
No money left 'til payday
Got all we need. Grab a bucket
We'll pick some blueberries on the way home.
So nice. Almost a touch of Heaven
Just taking care of what mattered most.

          Life in a small minig town. Family, friends, co-workers were what mattered 
most. I'd trade it all for yesterday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/3/2008 4:55:00 PM
stop by grandma's house. wow how i remembeing doing that. this was a great poem. thank you for reading my poem "Memory of a song. yes maybe it was a good thing i did not go, it was good they turned me down. because as crazy as i was i probley would have gotten killed. my buddy danny's friend had his throat cut in the same tent as danny was, so he was lucky to come home.
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