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For the contest of Malabika Ray Choudhur

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Topic #2: When I feel sad that my friend has drifted away . . . 

I’m an envelop - its contents emptied and missing a postage stamp

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2025 1:23:00 AM

- Back with a congratulation, Andrea :) - hugs

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 4/7/2025 1:23:00 AM

Dear Andrea, beautiful metaphor. Good luck. Have a blessed week.

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 4/6/2025 7:18:00 PM

I love the simplicity of your poems. Reminds me of someone just walking down a street, no worries, but full of care.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2025 10:49:00 AM

Whoa!! A sad one. Those feelings spilling over. Sara K. soupmail soon.

Karen Jones

Date: 4/5/2025 10:35:00 PM

So creative Andrea I love this!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/5/2025 9:46:00 PM

This works for me in two ways. ~ Lover of Possibilities

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/4/2025 12:05:00 PM

Nice one Andrea. Like the feeling of an empty envelope with no stamp.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/4/2025 11:01:00 AM

Oh my gosh, goodness, golly, gee-wizz-fizz - how poetic is this? A masterpiece, absolutely. The feel you deliver, the impact, I haven't the words, Andrea THIS IS EXCELLENT. The sponsor is going to find an assorted, hodge-podge of contest interpretations and I'm blessed to have a friend who pointed out what I failed to point out, thank you. You WOWED me, my muse won't stop jumping up and down ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/4/2025 12:19:00 PM

Wow. Didn't expect such a great reaction to it. Thanks, Caycay.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/4/2025 10:43:00 AM

Its really one of the most creative takes on the prompt! But i always get confused with envelope and envelop. The spelling confuses me and how did you come up with such a clever take! Just brilliant! This should score high! I hope! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/4/2025 12:19:00 PM

Hmm I hope I spelled it right!!