What makes you feel

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[Topic # 2: "When I feel sad that my friend has drifted away"] alone's ache only grows stronger-~as sand streams through glass without my soul

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/13/2025 3:32:00 PM

Stirring and beautifully epressed, Crystol. It's a pleasure to read this. Very best wishes.

Crystol Woods
Date: 4/14/2025 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Evelyn! Xo

Tom Woody

Date: 4/5/2025 11:01:00 AM

Packed full of emotion Crystol

Crystol Woods
Date: 4/5/2025 12:16:00 PM

These short poems are much more difficult in my opinion! I'm glad it was able to leave some kind of impression. Thx my friend! Xxoox

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2025 12:47:00 PM

A powerful Monoku write. I enjoyed reading this write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away.........

Crystol Woods
Date: 4/4/2025 4:32:00 PM

Oh yes? I'll come by to read yours! Ty Paula! Xo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/3/2025 8:25:00 AM

Heart wrenching! A most affective monoku, my best to you in the contest. xomo

Crystol Woods
Date: 4/4/2025 4:32:00 PM

Thank you so much! What an excellent comment! Xo