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What makes you feel

[Topic # 2: "When I feel sad that my friend has drifted away"]


alone's ache only grows stronger-~as sand streams through glass without my soul
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Buehler Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Stirring and beautifully epressed, Crystol. It's a pleasure to read this. Very best wishes.
Woods Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Evelyn! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:47 PM
A powerful Monoku write. I enjoyed reading this write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away.........
Woods Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Oh yes? I'll come by to read yours! Ty Paula! Xo
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April 3, 2025 at 8:25 AM
Heart wrenching! A most affective monoku, my best to you in the contest. xomo
Woods Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Thank you so much! What an excellent comment! Xo
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