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What Makes You Feel?

#1 When I am wrapped with a feeling of ecstasy

vulnerability of the sea - side to side, overboard, dismount

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Paige Hind

April 8, 2025 at 11:15 PM

Shows in your writing. :) A breathlessness you invoke in your poem.

Kim Rodrigues

April 9, 2025 at 6:58 AM

Thank you kindly!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 4, 2025 at 2:17 PM

So witty and fun, Kim! Thank you for sharing. :)

Kim Rodrigues

April 4, 2025 at 2:33 PM

Thank you for saying so! Hugs

Yann Rolland

April 3, 2025 at 3:51 PM

never insist with ecstasy, i feel unconfortable too, nicely done dear poet

Kim Rodrigues

April 3, 2025 at 5:25 PM

Thank you, Yann :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 3, 2025 at 11:26 AM

- Now I understand ... to me it sounds like you're seasick (I didn't understand ... dismount :))) - Excellent writing :) - Best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

April 3, 2025 at 12:23 PM

LOL...I edited so people would see the prompt...seahorse (in comments) what's that about?