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What Makes You Beautiful

FROM the very day we met, you've kept me wondering, what really makes you beautiful. Your sparkling eyes, like stars in the night, glistening with a hint of mischief and light, draw me in, leaving me spellbound and in awe, wondering what secrets they hold, what wonders they saw. Your hair, like a crown of natural coils and kinks, framing your face with beauty that always winks, falls in gentle waves around your shoulders, a sight that makes my heart race. Your smile, like the first ray of sun on a misty morn, fills my heart with a warmth that will never be gone, radiating joy and love, and all that is pure, a beacon of hope that forever will endure. Your touch, like a gentle breeze on a summer day, sends shivers down my spine, in a beautiful way, a sensation that leaves me longing for more, a feeling that I will always adore. And when we kiss, oh, the magic we create, a passion that is impossible to abate, your lips, like the nectar of a thousand flowers, a taste that lingers on my tongue for hours. In your embrace, I find solace, a sanctuary where all my worries cease, lost in the moment, I am forever yours, enraptured by the beauty that my heart adores. A beauty beyond words, a wonder to behold, a love that's worth more than diamonds and gold.

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Date: 3/8/2023 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Passionate. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/8/2023 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your top-winning placement Macharia with this lovely writing
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Date: 8/20/2017 5:44:00 PM
This is my first time reading your writings. This is lovely. Congratulations on this placement.
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Kabutha Hempstone
Date: 10/8/2017 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Dean!
Date: 8/20/2017 9:30:00 AM
Read your poem to my husband and he thought it was wonderful.
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Kabutha Hempstone
Date: 10/8/2017 1:18:00 AM
What? Thank you so much Gauthier!
Date: 7/28/2017 9:35:00 PM
Very romantic and wonderfully-written ... congrats, Hempstone!
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Date: 7/28/2017 8:01:00 PM
Hi Hempstone, a touching poem. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 1:07:00 PM
Lovely poem, Hempstone! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/27/2017 12:34:00 PM
Your love makes her gorgeous! Wonderful poem.
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