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What makes you beautiful

From the very day we met, You've kept me wondering, What really makes you beautiful. For a couple of years now, I've been trying to figure out the same, Whatever it is,I really don't know. Your sensational touch Reminds me of your secret paradise, Alas! A place of kisses and promises. And when we kiss, Your sweet! tasty lips give me a hint, Of what a champagne fest is all about. Would you mind please, To tell me what really it is, That makes you so gorgeous?

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Date: 8/20/2017 5:44:00 PM
This is my first time reading your writings. This is lovely. Congratulations on this placement.
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Macharia Hempstone
Date: 10/8/2017 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Dean!
Date: 8/20/2017 9:30:00 AM
Read your poem to my husband and he thought it was wonderful.
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Macharia Hempstone
Date: 10/8/2017 1:18:00 AM
What? Thank you so much Gauthier!
Date: 7/28/2017 9:35:00 PM
Very romantic and wonderfully-written ... congrats, Hempstone!
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Date: 7/28/2017 8:01:00 PM
Hi Hempstone, a touching poem. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 1:07:00 PM
Lovely poem, Hempstone! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/27/2017 12:34:00 PM
Your love makes her gorgeous! Wonderful poem.
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Macharia Hempstone
Date: 7/27/2017 1:09:00 PM
Really? Thanks though