What Makes Summer Heat


Sun under skies froze to places,
Its shade of darker, runs my skin — 
I thirst for lost kisses' spaces.
Sun under skies froze to places,
Bleach on clothes that mask my faces;
There light's story is forgiven — 
Sun under skies froze to places,
Its shade of darker; runs my skin —
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:12 AM
Love the creative triolet.
George Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:01 PM
The form of the triolet is meticulously followed. Great one, dear Paige.
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 2:01 PM
So creative. Loved kisses' spaces!
Poet Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:42 PM
Well-crafted triolet, Paige. Many layers of imagery adorn your poem.
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