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What Makes Me Sigh

A moment on the ear an opus creation without flaw the sound of pure laughter from a child on a see saw prolonged hours of ecstasy in the palm of God's hand the sound of the ocean on my chest and where I stand A daffodil of yellow smiling up at me from base the scent of petrichor in the soil after a days rain spectacular views from Mars or any place in outer space just about anything that makes me laugh, insane ! A slow and gentle kiss and poetry from Baudelaire romantic dates that end with chocolate and roses wooly socks, afghan blankets made of little squares antiques that remind me of mom, and her neurosis a million breaths released just after, "I SIGH", and all the things on my bucket list before I die. July 10, 2021/center>

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Date: 7/22/2021 8:57:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful in its colors with playful emotions of adult and child laughter and a sprinkle of reality neurosis. Well done. Congratulations
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Date: 7/20/2021 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations Rose, on your win. An excellent take on the things you keep to your heart - a brilliant sonnet. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/19/2021 6:56:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 7/15/2021 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write and picture. What more could one ask for roses, chocolate and kisses??? Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Date: 7/15/2021 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations, a fine sonnet.
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations Mystic Rose
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:47:00 AM
Hi Mystic Rose, dropping by with congrats for a well deserved win. Blessings and hugs Jennifer
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:10:00 AM
Back with congratulations for your contest win, with this so beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:03:00 AM
A beautiful write! Congratulations, Rose!
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Date: 7/14/2021 9:48:00 AM
a million breaths released just after, "I SIGH", and all the things on my bucket list before I die. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2021 2:28:00 AM
A lovely take on all things that are good. My grandmother used to crochet those colourful squares that make up a cosy blanket. Remember them well....
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Date: 7/11/2021 6:03:00 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, Just love the catalyst in this Sonnet that seeks a spark in many feelings. Leaving nothing wrong that can't be made right. -Richard
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:16:00 PM
You drew me in and held me inside your beautiful imagery. As I read, your poem felt sincerely heart born. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 7/11/2021 3:23:00 PM
A wonderful sigh of tenderness reflecting a sweet heart and spiritual mind, I wish you luck with the contest, blessings and hugs
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Date: 7/11/2021 1:43:00 PM
A sigh of beauty and joy ... a beautiful poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:41:00 AM
All lovely things, Mystic, great sonnet:)
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Date: 7/10/2021 11:06:00 PM
A well written sonnet. Hugs
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Date: 7/10/2021 10:07:00 PM
So beautiful. Each line made me happy. We have many desires in common. All the best for contest
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