Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

What Makes Me Move On Is

Even if I am soaked with tears,
Even if I am burnt to ashes,
Even if I am hurt to the core,
I move on…
With a new hope…
For that for every winter there is a spring
For that for every tail there is a head
For that for every pause there is a play
So…move on…
With a new hope…

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Liam Mcdaid December 28, 2015 at 6:57 PM hope always has a beautiful light it finds you in the end excellent pen Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 28, 2015 at 8:38 PM thank you liam :)) take care

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2015 at 6:33 AM Good attitude! Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 10, 2015 at 9:12 AM thank you friend :) God bless

Kp Nunez November 2, 2015 at 3:14 AM A write full of resolution, full of hope. Short but impactful. PS. How about changing "keeps" with "makes" in the title? Just my two cents...hugs! Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 2, 2015 at 4:04 AM thank you for the suggestion ROSSE.. :) changed it to "makes"..love and hugs :*