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What Makes Me Move On Is

Even if I am soaked with tears, Even if I am burnt to ashes, Even if I am hurt to the core, I move on… With a new hope… For that for every winter there is a spring For that for every tail there is a head For that for every pause there is a play So…move on… With a new hope…

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Date: 12/28/2015 6:57:00 PM
hope always has a beautiful light it finds you in the end excellent pen
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/28/2015 8:38:00 PM
thank you liam :)) take care
Date: 11/10/2015 6:33:00 AM
Good attitude!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/10/2015 9:12:00 AM
thank you friend :) God bless
Date: 11/2/2015 3:14:00 AM
A write full of resolution, full of hope. Short but impactful. PS. How about changing "keeps" with "makes" in the title? Just my two cents...hugs!
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Date: 11/2/2015 4:04:00 AM
thank you for the suggestion ROSSE.. :) changed it to "makes"..love and hugs :*

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