What Love Does

When love hits you like a glue,
You don't know what to do.

Even if something is fake,
You think it's true.

You don't have a break, 
But rather go through.

You know what it takes?
It makes you a fool.

It's like being drowned in a lake;
But not a pool.

It's a moment to celebrate:
That's why it takes two.

A lot of words to exchange,
That's me and you.

Count one to eight,and it got you.
The words of the gate:"I love you".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 16, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Janix, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Mehta Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Very creative piece with nice rhythmic expressions, Janix
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July 16, 2011 at 1:58 PM
THANKS DOC
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