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What Love Did To Me

Before you start a war You better know what you're fighting for We found love right where we are Laying under the stars You’re the one I adore I’ll throw away my faith just to keep you safe You’re my saving grace Someone like you cannot be replaced In my heart is your place My heart is what you chase Kiss me with a straight face If I fall you catch me just in case Now I feel like I have you misplaced If love is what you need a soldier I will be I’d surely hope you agree We have our names carved in the old tree Our love was like one two and three I thought you would come with me You show me no love I see You said you wanted to be free Your head filled with greed I begged and plead My love continues to bleed You're not the soldier I need Messing with me is what you lead You have succeed If you didn’t fight for what you want Then don’t cry for what you’ve lost I knew being with you had a cost My loved is what you have tossed I thought we would last I want to go back to the past My heart is like glass You broke it with alot of mass I thought you had more class You’re name is all I could cry for Still remember the coat you wore That made my heart feels lower than the ground floor I didn't know what you had in store Never leave me is what you swore I guess i wasn't’ the girl you were looking for You did it again once more Was loving me like a chore? Hurting me is all you adore Lying to me under the stars We never found love where we are Breaking me is what you’re fighting for I do not know the score But the battle has ended, but you have won the war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 9:35:00 AM
Hey Rose, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a deep and heartbreaking poem about betrayal from one who was supposed to love you back. If you get a free moment, check out my poem How Do You Say Goodbye. I am so glad you have joined us and I do look forward to more from you. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 3/25/2015 11:29:00 AM
Very well written and a poem that holds the reader, Tim
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Date: 3/6/2015 3:09:00 AM
ROSE, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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