What Lingers

I’d like to be what lingers
while you sleep:
the smell of jasmine

and the drops of rain
that cling
to trembling leaves.

I’d like to stay with you,
when you are far away
on private journeys.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 8:39 PM
Jan - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Thie Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 10:22 AM
Thank you, both, Jan
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 11, 2008 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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