What Life Should Be Like

Anything that is not right
See to it to end this year
Start with a good step to freedom 
Work in abundance in the heart
Train your mind in the way for wisdom
Learn from instructions of Elders
Condition your body and start running
Let God be your guide and your rudder
Prepare your heart for the gospel of peace
Obey the instinct of the Bishop of your soul
Life is a long way lackadaisical journey
So many stop, curve, and a long dash energy
It takes easy alone running without baggage
It takes happiness carrying baggage with love
Freedom is slavery without hindrances in going
Victory awaits for those who love persistence 
Your going has obstacles and stumbling blocks
Don't cower in fear, rather overcome hindrances
Life is like that, there are nights, there are days
The sweet things every sunrise, there is sunset
Be constant in your desire to accomplish things
Never end the day working nothing or idle
Life is measured in terms of achievement 
For at end of the day, life so tiring but gay
When the body take its meal, inert lay to rest
Eyes close in the night not to forget to pray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 1/14/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hello Hugo, I like this poem. thes are good rules to follow. everything is well said. Muc h love here. My fav. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2025 5:21:00 PM
Hello Hugo, these are good advice. Mjuch love here. /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 1/14/2025 9:51:00 PM
By experience, our life is guided by golden rules. We just have to solidify our choices in following those golden rules of life. We may have mistakes but should be rectify right away, be humble and learn to get through. Thank you, Darlene for understanding this poem. Love you more./Hugo.
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