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What Life Should Be Like

Anything that is not right See to it to end this year Start with a good step to freedom Work in abundance in the heart Train your mind in the way for wisdom Learn from instructions of Elders Condition your body and start running Let God be your guide and your rudder Prepare your heart for the gospel of peace Obey the instinct of the Bishop of your soul Life is a long way lackadaisical journey So many stop, curve, and a long dash energy It takes easy alone running without baggage It takes happiness carrying baggage with love Freedom is slavery without hindrances in going Victory awaits for those who love persistence Your going has obstacles and stumbling blocks Don't cower in fear, rather overcome hindrances Life is like that, there are nights, there are days The sweet things every sunrise, there is sunset Be constant in your desire to accomplish things Never end the day working nothing or idle Life is measured in terms of achievement For at end of the day, life so tiring but gay When the body take its meal, inert lay to rest Eyes close in the night not to forget to pray.

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Date: 1/14/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hello Hugo, I like this poem. thes are good rules to follow. everything is well said. Muc h love here. My fav. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2025 5:21:00 PM
Hello Hugo, these are good advice. Mjuch love here. /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 1/14/2025 9:51:00 PM
By experience, our life is guided by golden rules. We just have to solidify our choices in following those golden rules of life. We may have mistakes but should be rectify right away, be humble and learn to get through. Thank you, Darlene for understanding this poem. Love you more./Hugo.

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