The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

What It Took and Still Does

from time to time
and day to day
i always see you 
and i just hate

to know you're with your dream man
and i have stood in line
for days and weeks only to see
you'll never, ever be mine

i found someone new 
but never the same
will be she,to you're kiss
i know now and it does sound lame
it is you that i miss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Damstrom Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Been there.....Not meant to be .Not at this time in your lives anyway ...
Loveless Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 10:02 PM
Its not lame its understandable. The heart aches and it heals but no one ever replaces that first real love...but in time.if you grow to be a good man and let the past go you can find a better kind of love.
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