What It Feels Like To Die

I know what death feels like
its when you lay there hopeless
and your entire world crumbles down around you
you cant move 
you cant scream
you cant even cry

Because you are so numb
frozen in time
too scared to move
but still knowing its all comin down around you
piece by piece
like dominoes
a puff of smoke 
that chokes you
they all stand around you
with popcorn
Enjoying the show 
watching you fall apart 
its commedy to them
its heartbreaking for you
thats what death feels like.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:55 PM
That is life sometimes when there are people in your life that are takers and not givers...You have expressed the emotions involved very well..Sara
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