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What It Feels Like To Die

I know what death feels like its when you lay there hopeless and your entire world crumbles down around you you cant move you cant scream you cant even cry Because you are so numb frozen in time too scared to move but still knowing its all comin down around you piece by piece like dominoes a puff of smoke that chokes you they all stand around you with popcorn Enjoying the show watching you fall apart its commedy to them its heartbreaking for you thats what death feels like.

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Date: 7/8/2010 4:55:00 PM
That is life sometimes when there are people in your life that are takers and not givers...You have expressed the emotions involved very well..Sara
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