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What Is This World

What is this world?

I don’t know I don’t know

Some people are so sweet

Some are not

What is this world?

I don’t know I don’t know

Some people burn their bodies

Some people bury their bodies

What is this world ?

I don’t know I don’t know

Don’t be Bribe and bribe none

For it will kill the better ones

But who will walk so slow 

I don’t know I don’t know

In the world of God

All are ruled by equality

In the world of men

What is equality ?

Nobody knows

This world is

Sometimes

A place of sorrow

Sometimes

A place of happiness

But one thing to think is

What is this world ?

nobody exactly knows

Copyright © Fatima Hasan Zaidi | Year Posted 2013

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/19/2013 4:49:00 PM Dear Fatima,Much Wisdom in YOUR words. " In the world of God All are ruled with Equality " "In the world of men What is equality?" This is a Powerful statement. YOU have several great statements in this MasterPiece. Brilliant Write. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Login to Reply Fatima Hasan Zaidi Date: 4/21/2013 10:54:00 AM You are awesome Liege.. i just write what comes to my mind no one edits it , some times i even do not know the form of poetry.. i just go with rhyming word at the end .. i am happy n u can"t imagine how u made my day.

Kenisha Shines Date: 4/4/2013 7:58:00 AM enjoyed your write. Login to Reply Fatima Hasan Zaidi Date: 4/4/2013 11:54:00 AM :)

Poet Tacito Date: 4/3/2013 10:36:00 AM The world is how we define it to be. Just like you did here. Nicely done. Login to Reply Fatima Hasan Zaidi Date: 7/26/2014 3:18:00 PM :)

Matthew Horstkotter Date: 4/3/2013 4:46:00 AM Very good piece. Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply Fatima Hasan Zaidi Date: 4/3/2013 4:48:00 AM THANKEW SO MUCH