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What Is This World

What is this world? I don’t know I don’t know Some people are so sweet Some are not What is this world? I don’t know I don’t know Some people burn their bodies Some people bury their bodies What is this world ? I don’t know I don’t know Don’t be Bribe and bribe none For it will kill the better ones But who will walk so slow I don’t know I don’t know In the world of God All are ruled by equality In the world of men What is equality ? Nobody knows This world is Sometimes A place of sorrow Sometimes A place of happiness But one thing to think is What is this world ? nobody exactly knows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/19/2013 4:49:00 PM
Dear Fatima,Much Wisdom in YOUR words. " In the world of God All are ruled with Equality " "In the world of men What is equality?" This is a Powerful statement. YOU have several great statements in this MasterPiece. Brilliant Write. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 4/21/2013 10:54:00 AM
You are awesome Liege.. i just write what comes to my mind no one edits it , some times i even do not know the form of poetry.. i just go with rhyming word at the end .. i am happy n u can"t imagine how u made my day.
Date: 4/4/2013 7:58:00 AM
enjoyed your write.
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Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 4/4/2013 11:54:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
The world is how we define it to be. Just like you did here. Nicely done.
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Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 7/26/2014 3:18:00 PM
:)
Date: 4/3/2013 4:46:00 AM
Very good piece. Enjoyed the read.
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Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 4/3/2013 4:48:00 AM
THANKEW SO MUCH

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