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What Is That Thing Called

What do I feel like writing? Oh yeah, I am going to write about special feeling called love Is it love? You don’t know what to call it But you know that you are happy when you see that person You eyes lit up like a firecracker You tummy is dancing a little dance All butterflies are flying circling your inside You barely breathe You hold your breath without you knowing it Your stomach feels extremely tight What is up? Are you not in control of your body? Ha, not by the slightest You feel rushes of giddiness For no reason Oh yeah You are totally in a floated state Butterflies all around And the funny thing is It goes on forever It won’t stop You may have to call a paramedic For a remedy cure If there is one A state of light-headedness Jovial and oblivion To things around you Ahh you’d better not be driving You can hardly manage yourself Okay I think I barely touch the surface But you know I am trying I'm barely able to handle it I am hyperventilating And I like it, lol

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Date: 6/15/2014 1:11:00 PM
HELLO FRIEND! i like this poem.its well written.
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 6/15/2014 1:55:00 PM
Thanks, Cornel! Glad you like it. Love ya :)
Date: 6/12/2014 7:54:00 PM
Weee how fun! I know how you feel because I live that rush everyday, loving life and everyone I meet along the way. Loved your poem beautiful. Have a happy day!!
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 6/12/2014 8:17:00 PM
Everyone should. Love ya.

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