Dalila Agtani Poet Free verse

What Is She Thinking

WHAT IS SHE THINKING

"come fluttering words, come drifting words..."

Be natural and sincere
Giving complimentary remark is deadlier
To a Lady especially to a love one
As when you are not cautious
Extravagance of words turns tragic and vulgar
The best is simplicity and straight from the heart 
Especially when the assigned task is: Introduction
One who does  must know the person well
As guessing the innate personality is not all acceptable 
Not all flowery words are generous to the ear
But rather insulting
Thus deserving a spanking
As the fluttering words
Ends up  a drifting words
And she thinks of you a big liar!


Dalila Agtani
Entered in a contest: What is she thinking….
Sponsor:  Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet~
Date written: 7/26/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 8:18 AM May your inspiration be long lived and your life be filled with many wonderful years of writing and of sharing your excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Dalila. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr. July 26, 2011 at 10:10 PM Very nice flowing verse.......God bless....Old Jack......good luck on contest.

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 26, 2011 at 10:05 PM a great entry...good luck for the contest...hmm...it's all right here in the PHILIPPINES...JUST ALWAYS TAKE CARE...AND AS USUAL...WRITE MORE TO INSPIRE....~~~smile~~~~*_* junjun