What Is She Thinking
WHAT IS SHE THINKING
"come fluttering words, come drifting words..."
Be natural and sincere
Giving complimentary remark is deadlier
To a Lady especially to a love one
As when you are not cautious
Extravagance of words turns tragic and vulgar
The best is simplicity and straight from the heart
Especially when the assigned task is: Introduction
One who does must know the person well
As guessing the innate personality is not all acceptable
Not all flowery words are generous to the ear
But rather insulting
Thus deserving a spanking
As the fluttering words
Ends up a drifting words
And she thinks of you a big liar!
Dalila Agtani
Entered in a contest: What is she thinking….
Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet~
Date written: 7/26/11
Copyright © Dalila Agtani | Year Posted 2011
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