What Is Real

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out of the frying pan, we plunge into the fire succumbing thus to ego spawned desire ephemeral objects, our ego aspires where are we headed, oh hermit our deluded cravings have no merit fallen from grace, head and heart split bewildered we are, amidst myriad external illusions blown away like a leaf, is our fickle attention clear light dawning in void of cessation that that comes and goes unreal save throb of bliss nothing has appeal fire of bliss in our heart, purges and heals nonchalant soul presence, pure and unstained vaporising lower mind, divine joy ingrains unaffected by worldly loss or gain deluded ego in separateness slowly cognises interconnectedness transcending finally to absolute oneness earth life then thus a journey without movement discontentment transmuting to contentment culminating in blissful love enablement 05-April-2021

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Meghan Hutchings

Date: 4/17/2021 10:05:00 PM

It is so very true when "they" say there is always someone out there better than you! In this case, my poetry pales in comparison with your beautiful composition of words. You are truly gifted! I never allow myself the option to not try; I just hope I do not ruin the integrity of your beautiful words.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/17/2021 11:47:00 PM

You are too kind, Meghan! Poetry is but a resonation of our hearts impulse!

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/12/2021 1:25:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your words of wisdom, expressed in your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/12/2021 2:24:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words, Beata!

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2021 8:29:00 AM

Seeker, I admire so much your use of words, it makes for a thought provoking write, skillfully penned and another great example for your contest, oh I hope I can pen something worth, love _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/7/2021 8:56:00 AM

Go with your heart!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2021 12:17:00 PM

"bewildered we are, amidst myriad external illusions blown away like a leaf, is our fickle attention clear light dawning in void of cessation" This would have been enough. The rest was showing off!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/5/2021 7:00:00 PM

Happy you enjoyed, Caren! :)