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What Is Love

What is love? Realizing people lie, disguising your true self to be more satisfying to one that is your so called purpose in life to hope one day you become husband and wife, But deep down your body is crying slowly dying refining fearing of what they’re are doing at any given time. What is love? Sharing hugs having long walks talking till your mouth drops listening to please the one you oh so need. Buying gifts and then giving a warm kiss. But knowing one day it leaves you i the dust where you stay and rust. What is love? One day getting married to come to a realize one day one must be buried and sometimes we just remarry. Getting divorce weakening the others lively force. What is love? A sexual lust, a must have, a crave a faster way to get laid Spending money on your honey Hoping to get lucky soon then leave in heart beat. Coming to a realize you miss them come back begging on your knees pleading to take you back so they can be back-stabbed by the fact you are a monster who lacks the quality of being with one instead of of them all. What is love? Beating your spouse to show who is man of the house leaving one day thinking the baby will be okay because maybe they are better off without you or they doubt you. Folks love is a hokes leaves are body in an ache making or souls disintegrate with pain and torturing. I lost love for it is a distraction an unsolvable fraction of life in which it make us restless. We love that we may fill the holes that make our hearts ache, but in reality love is dull and dull cannot heal souls. What is love?

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Date: 5/6/2016 11:13:00 AM
Greetings Elijah. Congrats for your placement with this thought-provoking piece on love!! ;-)
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Teddy!
Date: 5/4/2016 10:35:00 PM
I would have like to see this edited a little better, I think you have very good ideas and thoughts, thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:48:00 AM
As per a new poet here, I decided to go for your best poems and I must say that this one left me flabbergasted! You are a gem, a star and a potential mega duper souper! Keep on writing friend and you are highly welcome to PS... A definite 7
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much this is one of the nicest comments I have ever got I will make sure to check your poetry out!
Date: 2/22/2016 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations Elijah on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:18:00 AM
Thank you your feedback means a lot!
Date: 2/22/2016 7:47:00 AM
Elijah, thanks for the lovely reply
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:18:00 AM
Thankyou for your time!
Date: 2/20/2016 9:51:00 PM
Elijah, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thankyou for your wounderful comments!
Date: 2/20/2016 9:10:00 PM
Elijah, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
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Date: 2/22/2016 7:37:00 AM
Anytime!
Date: 2/6/2016 9:09:00 PM
anytime, :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 12:07:00 AM
Hi Elijah, thank you for the wonderful reply
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:22:00 AM
Your welcome thank you for the review!
Date: 2/1/2016 4:15:00 PM
Hi Elijah, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/1/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thankyou I'm lucky to of found this website and thanks for the feedback!
Date: 2/1/2016 2:04:00 PM
Elijah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thanks skat for the warm welcome! And really the only thing about me Is I like to read and wright poetry or play on my drums

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