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What Is Love

am tryna formulate some lines Since you told me that u aint gonna be mine, You got my heart with a feelings that i cannot define, Love and live is all i have i in my mind I love u do i need to say this in vernacular Bany it hurts to separate doubles and make em singular I love u since u were a morula Look now u hit me hard and made me look like a dracular. Baby u make me speak in mixed up tenses Making me act as if am out of my senses Our love now seems like a post apocalyptic horror flcik

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Date: 1/2/2013 11:29:00 AM
love is hard seems nobody knows what it is, wonderful lines, Peter. -Lucas-
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Date: 12/15/2012 11:13:00 PM
Well penned Peter! Love does have the habit of turning our world into something we did not expect. Nicely done!
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Date: 12/15/2012 6:12:00 PM
Thats how love is for me.but then again i am young.love the poem .it gives me an idea
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Date: 12/15/2012 7:53:00 AM
Love. Your words paint a picture for me. Nice use of analogies mixed with emotion expressing your frustrated love that is ever haunting your heart.
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