What Is Life To You: Pain

What is life to you??
What does it matter when you fall down?
What does it matter when you can’t stand back up? 
Your knees are broken, and no one wants to help you.
What then is life to you?
Why can’t you cry? 
Why can’t you cry when your tongue is tied?
Why can’t you cry when your jaw is locked?
What then is life to you?
Why can’t you stand?
Why won’t you try to swim? 
See the water is calm atop its surface;
See the underlying issue with it.
Can you see why your knees are broken?
Can you see why no one wants to help you?
You attempt to command authority;
Do your words go anywhere when you’re on your knees?
You try to control everything; how can you, with a locked jaw?
Why can’t you see that if you swim… You’ll sink…
Can’t you see that the bubble you’ve created will implode?
Why is it… Why is it that you can’t you use your illusion…
Can’t you see that anything you use it for is selfish?
Can’t you see that this is why your knees were broken?
It doesn’t quite matter why, but now you still try;
try to command authority you don’t have anymore.
Your everything will fall; a trip down an ascending escalator.
Can’t you see? This will hurt,
Will,
You, 
be ready,
when,
it happens?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/9/2025 2:46:00 PM
"See the water is calm atop its surface; See the underlying issue with it." Yes, yes...I really appreciate those two lines.
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