Ann Gilmour Poet Free verse

What Is It With Crows

What is it with crows...
their reputation
before them goes
An omen of death 
A murder of crows
These ancient legends
who really knows 
if they are truths or untruths
                  
Spirit birds
so I have heard 
Keep a watchful eye 
Ensuring your safety
As you live your life
Often said to be sent
by a loved one
passing to the other side 

But which fate is mine
I haven’t a clue 
A tad unsettling
Not sure what to do
For this crow now perched 
Up on my roof 
Is rather disconcerting
My head is now hurting  
A majestic bird 
Head to tail he is dressed
in funereal black
Caw cawing so loudly
Stood tall and proudly

Does his presence 
predict my impending doom
Are we leaving this world 
him and I very soon

Today he arrives on my balcony
He is perched very close to my door
Staring and still 
Looking straight at me
Mesmerising or menacing 
Well I'm not entirely sure 
Now I begin to panic
Having felt unwell a while
What does he want to tell me 
What’s he trying to purvey
If only he could talk to me
If only he would say

Is this it 
Is this my day 
My time to go
Does he really know
This wise old crow
I wish he would go
But just in case 
I will live this day 
As if it's my last

    ‘cos one day it surely will be…

Written 1st July 2020 as I keep a close eye on that crow...


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Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2020 at 4:41 PM Crows and ravens acknowledge a human's efforts to be kind by spreading the word of how empathetic they have been. As a result these kind souls are left gifts and given preferential treatments from other ravens and crows; this poem reminded me. Ann Gilmour July 12, 2020 at 4:12 AM Wow, I never knew that Caren. They were always my son's favourite bird... Thank you for your welcome visit Caren, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Edward Ibeh July 4, 2020 at 12:58 PM This is an excellent poem, Ann:-) I really can't stand these birds, as highly intelligent as they are. Their LOUD cawing drives me crazy! Ugh. I think you'll like my humorous personification, "A Crow." Congratulations on your deserving win! Ann Gilmour July 8, 2020 at 1:14 AM Loved your poem Edward ~ thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Edward Ibeh July 5, 2020 at 5:09 PM It's near the bottom of page 10, btw. Have a blessed day, Ann:) Ann Gilmour July 5, 2020 at 2:55 AM Many thanks indeed Edward for your wonderful comments my friend. I will certainly visit your poem, as I do not remember it. Take care Edward. with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Regina Mcintosh July 4, 2020 at 11:12 AM This is SO amazing. I simply love it. It's a fave for sure. I wanted to say Congrats and you've written a gem that should be published in some poetry review somewhere.. Much love and blessings sent your way, Thank you for the inspiration. Gina Ann Gilmour July 5, 2020 at 2:54 AM Wow Gina, what can I say... thank you so much for your fabulous comments, coming from you such praise indeed, thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier July 4, 2020 at 8:58 AM Wow ~ congrats on your well deserved top win, Ann. A powerful and totally meaningful write many of us can relate to. Bravo. Superbly done. Ann Gilmour July 5, 2020 at 2:52 AM Gosh, thanks Line for your encouraging comments. So good to hear from you and I always appreciate your words and thoughts dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brenda Chiri July 4, 2020 at 7:33 AM Ann great poem! Congrats on your top win!;) Ann Gilmour July 5, 2020 at 2:50 AM Bless you Brenda for your congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Rico Leffanta July 2, 2020 at 1:47 PM Was it David who said, "Stone the crows"? Ann Gilmour July 2, 2020 at 10:24 PM I really have no idea Rico, but maybe. Thanks for your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Shirley Hawkins July 2, 2020 at 1:53 AM I really liked this verse Ann. I thought I was the only one who thought like this about these awful birds. Gloom and Doom... Ann Gilmour July 2, 2020 at 2:11 AM Well hello Shirley, so nice to meet you and yes this crow did really get to me, especially when I googled crows and read all sorts about them. Though there does seem to be a kindly side to them, in fact my dear son, who sadly died recently, was fascinated by them, so maybe he has sent this crow to keep me safe, who knows. thank you for your visit Shirley, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jenna Logan July 1, 2020 at 5:47 PM I despise the raven creatures, and it's not just because of Poe. Their raspy voices and arrogant stares creep me out. How bold they've become around humans. Hitchcock would've loved the one who pesters you. Keep an eye on him, Ann, because he has his on you. Ann Gilmour July 1, 2020 at 5:51 PM Yes I think you are right Jenna, I am going to keep both eyes on him, haha... Thank you so much for your great comments and so nice to meet you. I am now a little scared... With kindest thoughts Ann xx