What Is It? (Triple Tanka)

WHAT IS IT?  (triple Tanka)

it comes over you
like nothing you’ve ever felt
then you must ponder –
are conditions different?
is it because it’s springtime?

is it the birdsong?
do they sing so much sweeter?
is it the green-rush -
how bare places are hidden?
is it because it’s springtime?

is it that old love?
I should say old love made new
is that what it is?
oh! how the body responds!
yes!    it’s because it’s springtime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mills Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Spring time does have a wonderful affect on positively thinking about life. Love, susan
Green Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 11:57 AM
This was great! Spring is when things are new, critters born, flowers shooting up... there is a definitive feel to the air.
Hilliker Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 12:51 PM
A clever write. I love springtime! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the read.
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Glad that you have a love for spring that produced this great write that so entertained my afternoon..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Daver, this is a lovely ode to the special quality of springtime -- its renewal and beauty. Great triple tanka! Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:02 PM
magical poem! magical season! magical poet! jimbo
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 10:43 PM
GREAT poem for this awesome May DAY! LUv, Andrea ps Loved the sweet simplicity of this one
Hilliker Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 9:13 PM
I love the Springtime! Thanks for reminding me. A nicely written poem. Thanks for sharing.
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May 1, 2010 at 1:33 PM
The questions work well in this poem. I have a hard time accomplishing a single tanka and here you do a triple. Wonders of wonders. Nice job! Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:14 AM
energy revived, passionate.
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