James De Matteo Poet Rhyme

What Is It That Makes You Beautiful?

Is it your face?
               Which puts my heart in the right place.             
                  
                Is it your blonde hair?
               Which makes me stare.

                 Is it your smile?
                That makes me go wild.

                Is it your heart?
             That got me going from the start,

               Is it your charisma?
              Which gets me wanting ya.

              What it is, is you being yourself,
              Not pretending to be some one else.

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James De Matteo November 18, 2009 at 12:11 AM Thank You Linda! This was 1 of my old works unfortunately the more depressing poems are most recent lol But much love & greatly appreciated =)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 17, 2009 at 9:27 PM Nice write, James, good flowing words .. to your rhyme ... welcome to the Soup family ... keep sharing your verses with us... luv Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

James De Matteo November 17, 2009 at 5:37 PM Thanks again hun I appreciate it =) and you are absolutely right. There are too many beautiful people outside that are dark & ugly inside

Charmaine Chircop November 17, 2009 at 1:50 PM That is which makes someone beautiful...to be your ownself..that is beauty which never grows old,and you are wise enough to see that beauty..excellent message in the poem--Charma