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What Is It About Morning

What is it about morning?

It must be the freshness and freedom
an issuing forth from night's rest..
It is flow from a real self
before the veiling of day's concerns..
There is a springing of words
seemingly from the morning sun
or from the silence of the new day
not yet stained by separation's illusions..
It is a portrait of ourself
as we always have been...

Copyright © Charles Coon | Year Posted 2016

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Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 9/3/2016 1:19:00 PM Tour poems ...”a springing of words” in the most beautiful season of the soul... Login to Reply

Tom Arnone Date: 9/1/2016 9:04:00 AM Charles, your poem is so short and simple -- yet, deep and profound. Something to be read over again.... Login to Reply

Rizwana Bhurani Date: 9/1/2016 7:47:00 AM Wonderful interpretation.... Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 8/31/2016 8:40:00 AM Beautiful picture of morning atmosphere. Well done my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Login to Reply

Neeti Tibrewala Date: 8/31/2016 3:33:00 AM Your poem is as fresh as the morning breeze! Good going! Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 8/30/2016 10:06:00 PM A beautiful poetic description of morning. Great Write and Welcome! Login to Reply

Kyle Kriticos Date: 8/30/2016 9:19:00 PM Beatiful poem! 7 from me! Login to Reply

Riss Ryker Date: 8/30/2016 8:39:00 PM How wonderful! What fresh new way describe how a person is when they first wake up. Free from worry, true to self, for that brief moment. Loved this! Login to Reply

Monette Bebow-Reinhard Date: 8/30/2016 2:07:00 PM This is so lovely, it very nearly captures how I feel as I linger after awakening, waiting to catch night's inspiration. I think the last two lines are a little off, and wonder if adding two more additional lines will fill this out. Login to Reply

Matthew Rozon Date: 8/30/2016 1:56:00 PM Good One! Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 8/29/2016 12:11:00 PM Deep put and charming. Congrats, daver Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/24/2016 1:23:00 AM Charles with a C,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT** Login to Reply