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What Is It About Morning

What is it about morning? It must be the freshness and freedom an issuing forth from night's rest.. It is flow from a real self before the veiling of day's concerns.. There is a springing of words seemingly from the morning sun or from the silence of the new day not yet stained by separation's illusions.. It is a portrait of ourself as we always have been...

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Date: 9/3/2016 1:19:00 PM
Tour poems ...”a springing of words” in the most beautiful season of the soul...
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Date: 9/1/2016 9:04:00 AM
Charles, your poem is so short and simple -- yet, deep and profound. Something to be read over again....
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Date: 9/1/2016 7:47:00 AM
Wonderful interpretation....
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Date: 8/31/2016 8:40:00 AM
Beautiful picture of morning atmosphere. Well done my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Date: 8/31/2016 3:33:00 AM
Your poem is as fresh as the morning breeze! Good going!
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Date: 8/30/2016 10:06:00 PM
A beautiful poetic description of morning. Great Write and Welcome!
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Date: 8/30/2016 9:19:00 PM
Beatiful poem! 7 from me!
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Date: 8/30/2016 8:39:00 PM
How wonderful! What fresh new way describe how a person is when they first wake up. Free from worry, true to self, for that brief moment. Loved this!
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Date: 8/30/2016 2:07:00 PM
This is so lovely, it very nearly captures how I feel as I linger after awakening, waiting to catch night's inspiration. I think the last two lines are a little off, and wonder if adding two more additional lines will fill this out.
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Date: 8/30/2016 1:56:00 PM
Good One!
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:11:00 PM
Deep put and charming. Congrats, daver
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Date: 8/24/2016 1:23:00 AM
Charles with a C,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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