What Is It

what is it that brings these tears?
though it is not me 
a man sipping coffee
alone in the shop
watching others laugh 
or 
is it the thought of 
the woman sitting alone 
drinking in her room 
trying to remember 
how to
 
what is it that brings these tears?
why can't I stop?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Alexandropoulou Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Loneliness and tears are the stuff that the best poems are made. Liked it a lot.
Benally-Black Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:50 AM
It's something we all have and its too much sometimes. thank you so much.
Vinson Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Very nice, Alrenzo. That sadness is always out there, and you can touch it.
Benally-Black Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Thank you doug, It is and I love to recognize it as relevant thanks for reading
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