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What Is Eternal

Sense based awareness Amplified by thought Fulcrum mind body Limited spectrum Delusion results Objects fleeting Not eternal Mere imagery An illusion When we cede Ego thought Heart awakes We then Dwell in Void 14-January-2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:51:00 PM

very deep. So much is incomprehensible.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/14/2021 6:31:00 PM

Perceptions change, body changes, awareness, self aware is unchanging ... what is that? :)

Sand Blown

Date: 1/14/2021 12:49:00 PM

...nice write...'time'...is us, we are (of/as) the medium of change....and, change is but an 'effect' (percieved being).....the 'cause' (of the effect we call time) is here too but remains as perceptually obscured by times input through the five senses.... ....stan sand ....interesting validation code.... y 5 s

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/14/2021 6:27:00 PM

Happy you enjoyed, sand!