What If This Is Hell

What if this is hell
What if we are the dead
It makes sense
The murders, the rapes, the sorrow

I do believe it is a possibility,
So I am doing my best to
help others up and out
Inspiring them to follow their hearts.

Maybe the artists and the poets
are at the top level, almost ready for the giant leap
To the good place.
Maybe the murderers and the rapists 
have a long way to go

I do think I am right about this.
I am sold on it, because I have been invincible.
I have expected to die three times.
Yet, here I am. Alive? I doubt it.

Maybe our souls are crying because they
are aware that we are dead
Maybe this is hell.
It makes sense to me,
And it seems fair.

Tread lightly, my friend.
We are probably not supposed to know,
So go ahead and pretend ignorance.
I am only sharing this insight with poets and artists.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/6/2019 4:35:00 PM
Wow Caren, this one certainly made me think and of course I don't really have an answer, but with all the evil around maybe, but then again there are many beautiful people here too. I suppose we will find out eventually; but not too soon I hope! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/7/2019 5:36:00 AM
My husband and I both think this is a level of hell, and that when we "supposedly die" we get to finally go to heaven, unless we do not deserve it, then we come back here and experience more hell until we finally make it to heaven.
Date: 2/4/2019 12:16:00 PM
Great concept...and it could be so...the truth is one day we'll know...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/4/2019 2:45:00 PM
I do believe we will.
Date: 2/4/2019 11:00:00 AM
very nice...real edgar allen poe
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/4/2019 11:10:00 AM
I have rarely been this honored.
Date: 2/4/2019 9:46:00 AM
Loved this one :) "What if this is hell? .... It makes sense" loved these.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/4/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/4/2019 7:47:00 AM
Having had this same thought; I had to "fav".
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/4/2019 10:01:00 AM
I figured you did.
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