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What If She Only Knew

And Mama pins laundered sheets on the clothesline
Raising her creamy arms with a hum,
Gentle against  tainted bricks  of our wall
Right in front of this  grassy yard…
My velvet dress  all spruced up
Fragrant, pressed by morn’s daylight
On  luster of mid-autumn:
I observed and scanned her thinning curves
While I paused  to grasp that final snapshot;
Enough for me to watch her caring touch
The way  she would affably blot out my girlish tears
Crawling down her hands:

The backdoor now swings loudly, then quietly
Exposing run-down, decaying frames
Which rarely irks a mood so airy  as that last smile 
In twilight’s passing: Robed in clean lacy gown,
Dreary heaves falter to speak …if she only knew
I  tucked my velvet dress for my child, O Mama’s legacy.


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8/26/2019
If Only You Knew: Silent One’s Contest
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Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 3:08 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 6:04 PM
wow, Nette. you painted a very poignant picture. Excellent poetry! congrats on your win.
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your excellent write Nette, Mom's are special! Hugs, Jennifer.
One Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 4:11 PM
a very different poem from your pen... our memories of our mum are normally the most sentimental.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Cherished memories.. a superb write, as always, Nette.. no doubt a TOP win for you my friend.
Sharp Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 11:41 PM
Very poignant and emotive, Nette, and expressed with an exceptional delicacy; great write.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 8:14 PM
This is emotionally moving Nette. I think you created the perfect piece for the contest. Hugs Rick.
Green Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 4:33 PM
Beautiful Nette, this was touching and a perfect piece for the contest. Best wishes my friend.
Onat Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Brilliant poem! Keepsakes from memorable moments are the best souvenirs we can hold on to. I have my father's model planes which we both put together.
Michael Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 2:51 PM
The velvet dress...still survives...Love the mood you create...
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