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And Mama pins laundered sheets on the clothesline Raising her creamy arms with a hum, Gentle against tainted bricks of our wall Right in front of this grassy yard… My velvet dress all spruced up Fragrant, pressed by morn’s daylight On luster of mid-autumn: I observed and scanned her thinning curves While I paused to grasp that final snapshot; Enough for me to watch her caring touch The way she would affably blot out my girlish tears Crawling down her hands: The backdoor now swings loudly, then quietly Exposing run-down, decaying frames Which rarely irks a mood so airy as that last smile In twilight’s passing: Robed in clean lacy gown, Dreary heaves falter to speak …if she only knew I tucked my velvet dress for my child, O Mama’s legacy. * 8/26/2019 If Only You Knew: Silent One’s Contest *

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Date: 8/31/2019 3:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2019 6:04:00 PM
wow, Nette. you painted a very poignant picture. Excellent poetry! congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/30/2019 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent write Nette, Mom's are special! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/29/2019 4:11:00 PM
a very different poem from your pen... our memories of our mum are normally the most sentimental.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/28/2019 6:42:00 PM
Cherished memories.. a superb write, as always, Nette.. no doubt a TOP win for you my friend.
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:41:00 PM
Very poignant and emotive, Nette, and expressed with an exceptional delicacy; great write.
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Date: 8/26/2019 8:14:00 PM
This is emotionally moving Nette. I think you created the perfect piece for the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/26/2019 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful Nette, this was touching and a perfect piece for the contest. Best wishes my friend.
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Date: 8/26/2019 3:33:00 PM
Brilliant poem! Keepsakes from memorable moments are the best souvenirs we can hold on to. I have my father's model planes which we both put together.
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Date: 8/26/2019 2:51:00 PM
The velvet dress...still survives...Love the mood you create...
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